Just a couple of small ideas for panel 4, if you don’t mind. Maybe stretch out the “Oh” (Oooh, yeah!), and possibly she should be on her knees? Just something that struck me when I first looked at it, but I still like it! 😀
Well, as a hobby I do the editing and typesetting on a Japanese>English manga scanlation, so things like that kinda occur to me at times. Not that I’d consider myself a professional editor or anything, but it’s fun and since I love the manga, it makes sure I get to keep reading it! 😀
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anifreik
So Princess Heather is actually a sub looking for her Dom. 😛 May I volunteer?
anifreik
Just a couple of small ideas for panel 4, if you don’t mind. Maybe stretch out the “Oh” (Oooh, yeah!), and possibly she should be on her knees? Just something that struck me when I first looked at it, but I still like it! 😀
Jaycee
I’ve already talked to Wondollar about the being on her knees, but I didn’t think about stretching the “Ooooh.” Good idea.
–Jaycee
“I’m doing it.”
anifreik
Well, as a hobby I do the editing and typesetting on a Japanese>English manga scanlation, so things like that kinda occur to me at times. Not that I’d consider myself a professional editor or anything, but it’s fun and since I love the manga, it makes sure I get to keep reading it! 😀
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