Sneak peek of #292.
–Jaycee
“I’m doing it.”
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There are two versions of this strip. When I saw the first one, I wasn’t sure it was clear that eiraM was controlling Baby’s hands, so I asked Wondollar to add a “fading/ghostly” version of eiram’s hands, to suggest it was her remote presence doing that. Turns out it doesn’t work very well either because it looks like Baby is seeing the “ghost.” *sigh*
8 thoughts on “Members: Preview #292”
Gary Phillips
I hate pointing out spelling errors because I am such a bad speller. But on Panel one The second line by Eiram should that be “This one doesn’t seem to mind.” instead of done?
Jaycee
Oooh, good catch, thanks! We’ll fix that ASAP in the sketch.
–Jaycee
“I’m doing it.”
Gary Phillips
Maybe if you moved the frame over and showed Eiram in the mirror moving the hands but not on our side?
Jaycee
That’s a pretty heavy modification at this stage–almost a complete redraw, so it’s not really an option. I was looking for something minimalist, but it didn’t work. Fall back plan is to use the traditional magical sparkles…
–Jaycee
“I’m doing it.”
Gary Phillips
How about a dashed outline of Eiram like in Welcome to the suck.
Welcome to the Suck
Jaycee
We wouldn’t know until we saw it, but I suspect it’d do like v2 and look a bit off. I don’t want to make Wondollar work for nothing, so sometimes I just have to suck it up.
–Jaycee
“I’m doing it.”
Gary Phillips
Sometimes it just works out that way, You can always put in a comment saying what is actually happening.
Jaycee
We’ll see if it’s necessary… But yeah, that’s always an option.
–Jaycee
“I’m doing it.”
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