Whenever I make suggestions to someone else’s work I feel like I’m being a know-it-all-dick, but I don’t mean to be. That said, have you considered “I win (music note)” instead of “You lose” in panel 4? It seems to fit the faerie personality better to me. Just a suggestion. 🙂
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anifreik
Whenever I make suggestions to someone else’s work I feel like I’m being a know-it-all-dick, but I don’t mean to be. That said, have you considered “I win (music note)” instead of “You lose” in panel 4? It seems to fit the faerie personality better to me. Just a suggestion. 🙂
Jaycee
It’s a good idea! Thanks for the suggestion.
–Jaycee
“I’m doing it.”
Templar
Should call it “Cum Again?”
Jaycee
I went with “Crowd Controlled,” but “Cum Again” is a great title. I’m sure I’ll find some use for it somewhere. 🙂
–Jaycee
“I’m doing it.”
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